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Is anyone willing to critique my story so far?
First, you're completely lost when it comes to grammar and spelling .- XJ'aime your reply and I'll listen to Melissa, but the spelling of how the British, so everything might seem Topsy-Turvy.
(First, people who criticized your grammar and your spelling is really control their own!) You is a complex story, but as everybody said, seems to meander along towards an unknown destination. In other words, where is the story going? What is the message? It seems to me that you could use it as a good start to get your words on paper, but not as a product finished. Sometimes it helps to disect your paragraph by paragraph the work – are looking at the view and make adjustments accordingly. Do you think it can work for you as a diary "of the case? Best, Pamela Tyree Griffin, editor of http://theshinejournal.com http://joyfulonline.net
Soft Machine – Joy of a Toy
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October 28th, 2007 in
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